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Your own Wisdom |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk 
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Beauty, I compare all to a flower; Asking “do you know it is beautiful” then I ask about what eyes do miss-- ”do you find the bud just as beautiful” still the beauty of the flower remains within, I believe we are all flowers and buds; beautiful from the inside out. I hear that you do not think so? And each tear has fallen to a comment-- shallow are them who cannot see who think of nothing mind filled with sexual thoughts. Stand with me upon the edge of a mountain, did you see the beauty? Was it seen on our slow walk upwards-- or is it looking together out over the world I believe it was both, beauty is everywhere. You believe you are tied to the past, Be boundless, lay within the water-- let all memories flow through and around you, Become the water and the memories-- flow as one with your past don’t be the rock stopping the path. I am what you want me to be, Let me be apart of your memories; I shall be the bottled up water in the heart-- swimming from day to day inside you always telling you to believe in your self, And one day you will see without me-- and be able to stand upon that mountain with someone else, Giving them the same advice I gave you; and something more your own wisdom. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ 'Be boundless, lay within the water-- let all memories flow through and around you, Become the water and the memories-- flow as one with your past don’t be the rock stopping the path.' 'become the water' ... I REALLY like this thought~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"And one day you will see without me-- and be able to stand upon that mountain with someone else," Something like raising children - hold and then let go. Enjoyed the read, RedStoneEB! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
If only everyone could look at each other in this way what a wonderful world it would be. Great message and poetry as usual. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I am what you want me to be, Let me be apart of your memories; I shall be the bottled up water in the heart-- swimming from day to day inside you always telling you to believe in your self, And one day you will see without me-- and be able to stand upon that mountain with someone else, Giving them the same advice I gave you; and something more your own wisdom. oh wow, now this was classic...what a masterpiece, both you and your wise poem |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
"don't be the rock stopping the path" I could hug you literally for this write today. Thank you! It is a pearl. ~ Klassy  |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
Thankyou for all the wonderful replies My gift of my wisdom to you hopefully you'll all stand on that mountain top side by side |
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