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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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horizontal thoughts seek upward mobility wings are optional darting dragonflies hover to maintain vast swamps munching those that bite mosquito eater symbiotically keeps peace sets parameters [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (06-06-2006 10:28 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very clever! |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Always glad to hear your thoughts, Kacy, you've a unique look at life. Hugs, Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
Ah Well done ! I love this ! especially... "horizontal thoughts seek upward mobility wings are optional" So much said here. ::smiles:: I'll take Vertical Vision anytime. Those Horizontal thoughts...are just one durn thing after another. LOL |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Absolutely fantastic (I saw it all!) Waste not a second ~ Carpe' Diem |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
Great expression within a defined structure. The first one is especially impressive. |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
You write like a devil on speed Midnite Dave |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Very clever indeed! I love how you experiment with thought and form. I always find food for thought at your thread. This will be buggin' me all day. I'll have to save this for a later read after it incubates for a while... misce |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I opt for the gossamer beauty of wings. Dragonflies indeed! Red and turquoise tremulous with humming. I think summer is coming! Lovely write, Midnitesun. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"horizontal thoughts seek upward mobility wings are optional" I have no words to tell you how much I like this. How about ... damn fine work? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 each reply is like a caress |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Beautifully clever series of senryus as one poem - you've proven your talent yet again by being so versatile. I really love this and am saving it  Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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