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marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

0 posted 2006-06-05 01:56 AM

Summer Rain

The sun kissed the edge of eternity a good night,
Slowly immersing in the eyes of a setting eve;
While on the beachfront of comforting sands,
The laughter and passionate embrace of two lovers
Are silently and secretly envied,
By the tears of the day’s beautiful end.

Marcel

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2006-06-05 03:06 AM

Gorgeous write, Marcel. We haven't seen enough of your marvelous writing. Those last two lines.......awesome.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2006-06-05 06:52 AM

Keith! Good to read you again!

Tom Zart
Senior Member

since 2006-05-18

Posts 682

3 posted 2006-06-05 08:02 AM

Great poem I love it.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2006-06-05 09:07 AM

Unforgettable images.
Welcome Keith.
TD

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2006-06-05 01:11 PM

whoa, how deeply profound

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

6 posted 2006-06-05 06:38 PM

I read this and it is great in the whole meaning but I then found myself thinking that this only happens on TV adverts

It is too good on the flowing, no humanity fouling up gets in

It reminds of a statement that into every element of purity, you must put something that fails or else you can never create magic

Dave

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2006-06-05 06:56 PM

softly romantic
good to read you again

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2006-06-05 07:03 PM

Oh my..this is simply beautiful!
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

9 posted 2006-06-06 12:38 PM

Ummm... lovely.

tatalinia
Member

since 2005-12-17

Posts 137
CA, US

10 posted 2006-06-06 02:05 AM

this is such a beautiful poem, the last line was breath taking. excellant job

I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

11 posted 2006-06-06 04:51 AM

Absolutely gorgeous!

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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