Open Poetry #38 |
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I am Entwined |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
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I don’t know how anyone can be more beautiful Than the girl that I love Because I see her completely as who she is All other women are not as complete There hair not as perfect there clothes not as neat I am entangled in her beauty all day And in such a beauty I believe I will stay No matter her sentiments for my words or me I will love her so tenderly The reason her beauty has tangled me so For her complex nature and charm she has none But a magnetism so strong To me it is a constant pulling inward And this pulling gets me further entwined For it is her love I wish to feel Deep inside the forest of needles and vines They will cut me and scar me but never detour For my love is so pure No pain such circumstance can give Will draw me back lest I would cease to live My goal is to find her love For she has found mine a much lesser task For her it was my sight that found her and basked She was too you Too something I’d never seen Too sad to see you, your love with him But too for me this day Is so bothersome indeed unrest Is what I get for loving one who’s too possessed
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
masterfully written oh my, a keeper for sure so many good lines |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland |
cool ![]()
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