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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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oh lordi what have we here a hard rock fantasy and the crash of a thunderstorm today shook my sensibilities loose and the sky really IS falling faster than any speeding bullet train caught in a rainstorm my ears heard thunder, crashing waves of lightning oh my, but the finnish line is never where you think it is and some might say an old musical score has been ripped asunder by the thunder of a new rock Hallelujah and I turned away remembering when I did attend a concert years ago in costume a mister marilyn guy who stole the sky and stuck it in his pocket for a rainy day. It's raining, Marilyn and you must be smiling. No... I shall not attempt to 'splain this bizarre write. A thundergod wrote it. |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Talent danced on Words that knew Danced and danced All askew Danced and danced On a breath knowing There Was air beneath You write and I would get arrested If I wrote further You write words that have so much substance Dave |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Is this a poem about the Finnish hard rock band that won the eurovision song contest?..if it is then it was well observed..i enjoyed their entry..you couldnt say it was boring..they worked hard and came up with something different..well done to them..and thank you for this Kacy.. Goldenrose. ''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God'' Psalm 42:1 |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 Dave, careful now, I may have to send you a huge cyberhugyes, Phil, they kinda remind me of KISS. I listened to Hard Rock Hallelujah, and enjoyed it. Their antics on stage are hilarious. I also have them sitting on my desktop right now, screensaver...just for fun and a reminder not to take myself too seriously. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I like how your mind works! It's a lot like mine!  I love to write like this once in awhile ~ without rhyme or reason! The words just write themselves and I go along for the ride! lol Yer cute, Kacy!   Linda |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"what have we here a hard rock fantasy and the crash of a thunderstorm today shook my sensibilities loose and the sky really IS falling"  |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Don't know the band, but WOW! did I enjoy the thundering perfomance of your poem! - Owl |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Midnight I love and read your words But does everyone seem to be getting Spiritual Do we now have a web site targeted So many words I am reading seem to start invoking religion If they are, can people not understand that we have owned religions for as long as their is 'real estate' Apologies, if I get this wrong but words are words and only a vehicle for words, not messages Dave |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
What a fun write..!!  Now you will have me looking and listening for this Finnish hard rock group. Most enjoyable read. Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
lol, Dave  Personally, I am not religious. Spiritual sometimes, but to me, that's an altogether different thing. I enjoyed watching a video clip of Lordi and listening to their hard Rock Hallelujah and found it refreshing that pablum and babytalk did not prevail this time. hey Nancy, they wear the wildest masks and costumes too mych fun.... |
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