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Open Poetry #38

I am no woman

shirtless
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since 2006-04-29

Posts 359

0 posted 2006-05-23 05:25 PM

I am no woman,
but let me say
that I have been entered
like a cave,
that I have been emptied
like a breast,
that I've slipped my tongue
into the mouth of death.

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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2006-05-23 05:32 PM

into the bowels of earth and beyond
intense

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

2 posted 2006-05-23 06:02 PM

My writing tends to be pretty obscure but I have to hand it to you

I haven't the faintest idea what you are talking about, and I write succinct at times

dave

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2006-05-23 09:01 PM

Intense indeed....and I'm going to retire the word "Damn!" I use it way too much for your poetry LOL even though this poem does deserves a damn

"that I have been emptied
like a breast,"

Love that line!

I understand the poem, or at least I think I get what you are conveying.....regardless, this is excellent expression.

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

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