Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175
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2006-05-21
03:35 PM
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Coming to terms With how things Have turned out I promise I won't hold your feelings against you Or the words That would flow from your insecurities I thought At one moment in time That You and I Were invincible But how the beating heart lies I turn the page Only to find you Closer than before I sometimes Wish You did love me But you are Someone elses destiny And I as well Once you were a stranger But now you are in focus I'm the one That's a blur I can't help But feel the sting Of that moon laced kiss But I've gotten pretty good At convincing myself It just wasn't meant to be And not to take it personally....
If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.
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Kristen Brandon
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
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2006-05-21
03:54 PM
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But you are someone else's destiny...
~*~
When one sees the truth, one is right to move on...
Good to "see" you again, Kristen!
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Magnus
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since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
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2006-05-21
04:02 PM
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Thank you for your reply and thank you for a very true and real write of one's heart.
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Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
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2006-05-21
04:09 PM
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"I sometimes Wish You did love me But you are Someone elses destiny And I as well Once you were a stranger But now you are in focus I'm the one That's a blur" __________________________
I relate to this more than you know, sometimes denial is truth and vice versa - acceptance is the hardest part, even though one can never truly let go. Raw and powerful....I'm keeping this for someone.
Melissa~
Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!
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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
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2006-05-21
04:11 PM
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hey girl!
good to see you here! I can relate to this poem for sure...a very mature level is written here...I guess people do change
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
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2006-05-21
04:23 PM
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Time and change happens...it is a growing thing, even though sometimes it hurts. Well written heart song!
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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
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2006-05-21
05:01 PM
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Impressive write... I learn by your honor. TD
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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
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2006-05-21
06:47 PM
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This is mature thinking, dear girl. Coming to terms is important and you do it with insight and beauty.
Love, Margherita
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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
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2006-05-21
08:33 PM
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Kristen, you truly are a beautiful work in progress and your future will be filled all the wonderful things in life that you deserve ~ because you will have earned them!
Sending you a warm, loving hug, Your friend, Linda
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