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WIDOWER'S DAY
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WIDOWER'S DAY |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
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WIDOWER'S DAY I think of you sometimes in the morning when the islands are dressed in a negligee of mist I think of you sometimes in the afternoon when the heat of the day brings the water to whitecaps I think of you sometimes in the heart of the night when I stand on the dock and the stars are in the lake http://www.anthonyarmstrong.zoomshare.com |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this has such a beautiful ache to it...  |
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picturegramic Member
since 2006-05-16
Posts 112 |
Bitter Sweet Love the ending stanza. Another keeper. thanks for sharing this one. picturegramic |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
SEA and picturegrammic, thanks for your kind comments. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
If this is personal, my small gift of sadness for your intense sorrow. Your poem is poignantly painted with the brush of a master. - Owl |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A powerful longing poignantly and softly written....especially liked the imagery of the first stanza. Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a beautifully written song of sorrow |
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