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perfect stranger
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since 2006-05-29

Posts 54
on cloud 9

0 posted 2006-05-31 05:40 PM

                                                                                                                                                                           HEAVEN
------                                                   i wanna go to NEW YORK mabaye get a job and go to work
i wanna eat pickles with my fish and chips lots of salt and vinegar not good for the hips
i wanna get a suntan lying in the sun not look orange with fake tan thats not much fun
i wanna go to heaven in the clouds above the sky
i dont wanna go to old nick down below in a box thats not much fun

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

1 posted 2006-05-31 06:09 PM

Best of luck

America will no doubt embrace you

Dave

perfect stranger
Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 54
on cloud 9

2 posted 2006-05-31 06:36 PM

thanks a lot bodger,hope to go to New Your next March ,cheers for ansewring.

perfect stranger
Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 54
on cloud 9

3 posted 2006-05-31 06:38 PM

'bodger that should be York not to good at the computer hope to get better.

[This message has been edited by perfect stranger (06-01-2006 03:52 AM).]

perfect stranger
Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 54
on cloud 9

4 posted 2006-06-01 03:40 AM

heaven

i wanna go to new york
maybe get a job
and go to work
i wanna eat pickles
with fish and chips
lots of salt with vinegar
not good for the hips

i wanna get a suntan
lying in the sun
not look orange
fake tan thats not much fun

i wanna go to heaven
above the sky on cloud nine
i don't wanna go to old nick
down below in a box
now thats not much fun.

________________

i have revised my poem & changed it slightly. my hubby had to show me how to key in ,am new to the pc .

perfect stranger
Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 54
on cloud 9

5 posted 2006-06-01 03:40 AM

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[This message has been edited by perfect stranger (06-01-2006 09:55 AM).]

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2007-06-16 10:46 AM

PS~

Just doing a little reading and found this~

Well, if New York won't fit the bill ... you and hubby come on down to Florida ... we've got that laying in the sun thing covered~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [EMAIL]noles1@totcon.com[/EMAIL

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2007-08-03 05:22 PM

Nice...James

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