Open Poetry #38 |
In Season |
Will Rhyme Member
since 2006-05-22
Posts 149 |
He knew the waiting, almost over; had seen the blooming rose upon the slate of un-cut clover Spring's un-dying lust. To be a friend, to flower, or rock, or advocate of dust; to see how latent grows the garden despite the un-just mower that stood there by the wilted rose; he knew the waiting, almost over. |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
If I'm wrong I apologise but is sounds like a bunch of students and if the place was any good they're have lived in it themselves Dave |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A keeper of moments where life is garnered, and gleaned, perhaps worshipped... before the evil cut of death... that... is what I see. Well done, Sir! |
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Will Rhyme Member
since 2006-05-22
Posts 149 |
Ah, despite my "cloudy" pen, you "have seen" with clear, bright eyes! Thank You Mam, Will |
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BROTHER JOHN Member
since 2006-04-06
Posts 386 |
Dear Will Rhyme, Well stated! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ahh, our friend ... The Reaper...might he be thereabouts, close to the wilted rose? |
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Will Rhyme Member
since 2006-05-22
Posts 149 |
Acute observation my friend, Indeed you are right, for, since the beginning of poetry and well, time itself, that sneaky rascal reaper seems to hang out among the thorny roses. Thanks for the comments. Will |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You are quite welcome; it seems to me that in time, and trust, one sees these things clearly... but only with age, and not all aspire to see with this clarity. I commend you for a pen that is not fogged at all... but with bright, brilliant eyes. |
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Will Rhyme Member
since 2006-05-22
Posts 149 |
Ah, Sunshine, with the bright eyes! You see more, and farther, than most. Time needs neither explanation, nor, one single second to reconsider things. As you know, it.... takes care of it's-self. waiting long enough, well, the dust collects!!! Temporal beings, such as you and I, now, that's another story. Thank you bright Lady of the Sun, your commments most welcome anytime. Will |
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