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'She said: He said'
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'She said: He said' |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand 
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3973 ‘She said: He said’ 09 May 2005 She said: I don’t know why you put up with me But I am grateful that you have He said: Of all I have put you through Most woman would have given me their marching orders long ago Was this love or more admiration from a far Two souls united in an understanding She said - He said “how happy we are” “Where there is no vision, the people perish: but he that keepeth the law, happy is he.” Proverbs 29:18 KJV © 2006 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet) a poet who cares |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
You pose an interesting question. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Gratefulness and wonderment....two of the strongest building blocks of love -- the real, lasting kind. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
"the real, lasting kind" in this case not so true, as although what features in my poem was taken from my own message and her message. Time never stood a chance and that connection of trans world on line proportion no longer exists between both parties and his not for a considerable time. thanks for your comments, as they are always welcome a poet who cares |
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