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Wild Welcomings
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Wild Welcomings |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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See the river there? It runs through me into a deep pool and there within its reflection I see many wild welcomings. The sky and even singing birds corner the curl of moss. I am there see my hair? A mermaid of fresh water, she lifts her contemplation up and knows each thread in the fabric of art she watches is turning with her toes as slowly a dance she knows becomes the quiet melt of songs already sung, just beginning and will be begun. Blow a kiss into this other place then hold my wild in your embrace, funnel the current between the rocks a riffle is made from this love unlocked. I’ll catch it in the ripple, take it through the canyon and across the city to the sea with me. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Blow a kiss into this other place then hold my wild in your embrace, funnel the current between the rocks a riffle is made from this love unlocked. I’ll catch it in the ripple, take it through the canyon and across the city to the sea with me. whew, simply magnificant writing, passion and great awareness go hand in hand in this one...beautifully done Thank you for the brillance of this |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSis~ Could you let me know the name of your brain surgeon ? I would LOVE to order one of those implantable Martiesque chips~  LOVE IT ... JUST LOVE IT~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie You really are one of a kind.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a creative, imaginative, and uniquely expressive write this was! Thoroughly enjoyed, Ms Poetess!  Loving Light & a great big hug, Linda |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I think that would be a nice float trip, too  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
You write magic! Paul |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah dang, Paul stole my line. Magic, indeed! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
See the river there? It runs through me into a deep pool and there within its reflection I see many wild welcomings. Indeed I do, dear lady, indeed I do. It runs into a very deep pool, one you draw from in just the right measure, to share with us. This poem is beautiful in every way. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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