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Open Poetry #38

Walking On The Wind

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2006-08-31 10:29 PM

Walking On The Wind

In the distance,
Trees glimmer in the breath of evening
Dancing about the promise of cool, clear night
Bathed in gold and silver songs

Where carries my heart
The staff and clef of a contented sound
Movement beyond the truth of endings
Beginning, in rise of a nocturnal sun

Rise as the moon
Full and creamy breast of velvet sky
Glinting trepidation smoothed and lifted up
Silken aria carries within, the whispers of a breeze

Each an uneven foot
My step upon the fragrance left
Movement without effort, faint and soft
Carried here, to be amid exhaled fall

Our souls, walking on the wind

Copyright Kkh 08/31/06

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2006-08-31 10:44 PM

As August mourns, September comes in
as a light featherweight of time
to be remembered, enlightened in the dawning
of some soon to be....

this poem creates that moment, and very well indeed.

Thank you, Kathleen. You gave some inspiration here....but then, you do that time, and time again.

Well done.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2006-09-01 12:39 PM

"Where carries my heart
The staff and clef of a contented sound
Movement beyond the truth of endings
Beginning, in rise of a nocturnal sun"

this one is simply lovely
TD

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