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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
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0 posted 2006-08-31 10:29 PM


Walking On The Wind

In the distance,
Trees glimmer in the breath of evening
Dancing about the promise of cool, clear night
Bathed in gold and silver songs

Where carries my heart
The staff and clef of a contented sound
Movement beyond the truth of endings
Beginning, in rise of a nocturnal sun

Rise as the moon
Full and creamy breast of velvet sky
Glinting trepidation smoothed and lifted up
Silken aria carries within, the whispers of a breeze

Each an uneven foot
My step upon the fragrance left
Movement without effort, faint and soft
Carried here, to be amid exhaled fall

Our souls, walking on the wind

Copyright Kkh 08/31/06


© Copyright 2006 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2006-08-31 10:44 PM



As August mourns, September comes in
as a light featherweight of time
to be remembered, enlightened in the dawning
of some soon to be....

this poem creates that moment, and very well indeed.

Thank you, Kathleen.  You gave some inspiration here....but then, you do that time, and time again.

Well done.


The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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2 posted 2006-09-01 12:39 PM




"Where carries my heart
The staff and clef of a contented sound
Movement beyond the truth of endings
Beginning, in rise of a nocturnal sun"

this one is simply lovely
TD


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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2006-09-01 10:03 AM


Simply superb

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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4 posted 2006-09-01 10:46 AM


Each an uneven foot
My step upon the fragrance left
Movement without effort, faint and soft
Carried here, to be amid exhaled fall


magnificant

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
5 posted 2006-09-01 03:03 PM


Beautiful!!

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

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