Open Poetry #38 |
Eleuthera |
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
written in 2002 there, I saw beauty of everything that I’d ever known and yet to find.... everything I had dreamt of wanted fought for drenching me with moist smiles of air in a victorian laced wedding dress humid/ancient Each moment yearning to participate like Eleuthera is... an old ancient woman with a friendly tongue & azure water like throat yawning threads of sea soft tangible music swaying layers unfolding equating the sum of something essential like "Sunday Mornings" sweet~ exposing my soul’s most intimate portrait delving into endless pools of quiet noise (white sound) penetrating nights throughout ....days & in-between oh my Lord, what an intoxicating voyage waiting for entry to spend itself dripping a genuine need diverse imagination the ocean I sailed as a child encompassed in this simplicity this eternal dimension returning to sobriety the immobilization of love both fortune and peril within I recognized myself again recognized the intense poet of self- examination within this swollen element there is a prophetic quality an entire sea indoctrinating the mind’s eye to liberty let it be said... an intellectual admiration an exaggerated composition on my right side separating woman from child day from night yet linking generous convictions very softly articulating smiles four encompassed trade winds combines everything into one sound multiple language, all in its own, translating destiny...literally dedicating a lifetime of community service to human emotion opening avenues of spiritual consciousness from where we develop How you use it is entirely up to us and so upon return there to that place in time to Eleuthera I will refresh and be open to this tremendous touch this Hand of nature of sea of warm tropical trade winds and God I have never before felt so close to everything like one with all... in Eleuthera http://www.hallmark.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/product|10001|10051|145169|-2;-102001;11446;-102034;92055||P4R2SO| [This message has been edited by LeeJ (09-01-2006 09:01 AM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Whoa! Write on! Were you in the Bahamas when you wrote this? More! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"there, I saw beauty of everything that I’d ever known and yet to find...." On the cusp you were and what an experience it must have been. Enjoyed this, LeeJ! |
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