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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2006-08-31 11:27 AM


~*~
sweet nectarous lips
eternally nourishing
imperishable
~*~

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2006-08-31 11:51 AM


Interloper
Good one.

LeeJ
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2 posted 2006-08-31 11:54 AM


yes indeedy
astounds the senses

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3 posted 2006-08-31 12:26 PM


Irresistible
your kiss ....constantly craving
I’m insatiable

HopeS
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4 posted 2006-08-31 12:38 PM


Savouring those thoughts , yes sweet indeed

Hope

The Lady
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5 posted 2006-08-31 12:38 PM




"sweet nectarous lips"

the way you begin is enough for me
I like the rest too...

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6 posted 2006-08-31 12:54 PM



I, in caring, do
seek to quench your thirsting lips
Undeniable~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -       noles1@totcon.com       

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7 posted 2006-08-31 12:58 PM


Hi Interloper....I must admit I looked up "nectarous" just to make sure it meant what I thought...it did!!  A lovely word.
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8 posted 2006-08-31 01:39 PM




Well done, Sir!

Interloper
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9 posted 2006-08-31 02:01 PM


Sy ~
Thank you sir Knight

LeeJ ~
Your response astounds my senses ... sigh...

Susan ~
uncontainable
thirsting desire for your lips
unappeasable

HoseS ~
savoring sweet thoughts
appealing to mind and soul
simply caloric

The Lady ~
The beginning is just as important as the apex, don't you agree

Marge ~
extinguishing thirst
slaking the insatiable
are you that caring

Martie ~
I do that to make Susan use the dictionary.  She thinks I make up words out of hand ... and we all know that's a bunch of flaverhavitz

Sunshine ~
You grace my work with your presence, ma'am

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2006-08-31 02:55 PM



quote:
extinguishing thirst
slaking the insatiable
are you that caring

I am that caring
Forebearing all consequence
In lip-locked delight~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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11 posted 2006-08-31 03:28 PM


You certainly inspired here, Interloper, with your sweet words - sweet, sweet, words!  
Interloper
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12 posted 2006-08-31 03:45 PM


Marge ~

quote:
extinguishing thirst
slaking the insatiable
are you that caring
    
I am that caring
Forebearing all consequence
In lip-locked delight~

~*~
waste not that caring
I don't want to be shot dead
by lucky hubby
~*~

I luv ya, Marge  

Honeybunch ~
sweet is as sweet does
like a candy cane I hope
sticking to your lips


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.
Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2006-08-31 06:01 PM


LOL !

Hubby I have not
but Bill's shotgun stands ready
for kissing poachers~


LOL ... you're a jewel !

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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14 posted 2006-08-31 06:27 PM


Nice...James
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