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Neotec
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since 2006-08-22
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0 posted 2006-08-31 05:38 AM


Not knowing what to say
Wanting to cry
On shoulder dear.

Wanting to say
Sorry
Not knowing how to.

Crying in the night
Wishing for the words
To ask for help.

Begging lost souls
For help,
With the words.

So dear to my heart
Lost I have you
Without hope
Of saying
What is needed.

Wishing you to hear
"I am so sorry, my Little one."

Looking to heaven
Asking
For the chance
To say them
From the heart
To your ears,
With tears in my eyes.

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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1 posted 2006-08-31 08:24 AM


so sad, yet, the words I'm sorry surely go a long long way...


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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2006-08-31 11:12 AM


Heartfelt write.
Well done.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2006-08-31 11:13 AM



You're written a
for me...thank you!


Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
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4 posted 2006-08-31 12:27 PM


So short those words "I'm Sorry."...BUT!
So hard to say.
Hugs
BonBon

Martie
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5 posted 2006-08-31 01:00 PM


Neotec...there is always a chance to speak from the heart.  This tugs at mine.
Neotec
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since 2006-08-22
Posts 112

6 posted 2006-08-31 09:41 PM


The one to see
No longer
Comes to the site

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