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My Cradle Ship
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My Cradle Ship |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite: My Cradle Ship I asked the winds to blow today To task my cradle soft in sway To wing me through the oceans blue And bring me back the past I knew She plays me long my mistress sea By touché and her bribery In swoons and little sprightly gusts In tunes that stir my inner lust With velvet nights and gem full skies She lures me with her gentle sighs And stews me in her revelry Till blue and green is all I see She is a shrew when she is mad That brews the blues to freighting bad With waging toss and lightening floss And raging seas of chaos force She stays me with her contrabands And shouts Ole, to my demands |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T. ~May your life seas be calm and gently rock your boat, I mean, "cradle".  Lovely write, Sir Sonneteer! Loving Light and a big warm hug, EA |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You word-rock a rhythmic cradle most of us can only HOPE to ever come close to swaying~ 'I asked the winds to blow today To task my cradle soft in sway To wing me through the oceans blue And bring me back the past I knew' Bless you as each day yawns anew~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
A Knight upon the bounding main  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
With velvet nights and gem full skies She lures me with her gentle sighs And stews me in her revelry Till blue and green is all I see She is a shrew when she is mad That brews the blues to freighting bad With waging toss and lightening floss And raging seas of chaos force She stays me with her contrabands And shouts Ole, to my demands this was strickly Sy, in his bestest dress...well done, enjoyed this a lot |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
It seems to me there are beautiful words. And then there are beautiful thoughts. Then further on, there are beautiful images. But...now here lies the tricky part...not many that can bring all three together in harmony. That is where YOU come in. Thank you for the reverie. Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Good afternoon my sweet Angel.  Marge, And you are an Angel in disguise.  Interloper And who could be my aim? Thank you LeeJ Can the simple ever catch the involved? seraphin, I rolled your comment on the edge of my taste buds and it tastes sweet. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
my sweet sy, how r u sir My spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES Better now that I see you here. Missed you |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"She plays me long my mistress sea By touché and her bribery In swoons and little sprightly gusts In tunes that stir my inner lust" oh my, this is lovely Sir |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy can sail and he can rock a boat...and I'll bet he can even swim!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Yes I can swim, above and below water. LOL And thank you lovely Lady. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I could see, smell and hear this gift you gave me in words. It is lovely. aziza |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
aziza Thank you dear for the lovely comment. |
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