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Honeybunch
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0 posted 2006-08-29 09:17 AM


(I just had to give this a go.  Anyone else going to try?)


Love is not a sandgrain but a VBallNut
hiding in Obscurity and far, far, away
from the pen&paper list
of a poor Dublin Boy
and though he searches Sunshine
and the WindWalker
for his Earth Angel
he’s like an Interloper in a crimson tear
until a Dark Stranger says, “Hark!  This Diamond’s here”.

He looks to The Lady, nakdthoughts visible,
while HopeS comes to the boil
in his Gentle Spirit.

“Oh, Klassy Lassy, my Uriah,
come make me shirtless, please”
but a poettothecars interrupts his reverie
to make him a Professor Gloom
playing.with.crayons
like themute Midnitesun
in fear of Dragon Mistress,
his woman of Troy.

“LeeJ, LeeJ, LeeJ”, he calls
“Can’t you save my froggy skin
and make her love this Honeybunch
with the heart of a Mistletoe Angel?”
but aziza, the Neotec expert,
throws light on the matter
and, lo, seraphin, the Lisey of all time!

1slick_lady she is in a justbleu riaz
racing down the shawn105
towards JamesMichael and ecstasy
but Marge, Marge Tindal,
oh, she’s a sly one holding hands
with Seymour Tabin
on the corner of Ericc and Munda
with Dr.Moose1 standing by
to solve the riddle, the riddle of love,
posed by Martie in soul connection
with gheber and jwebs
but ballajosue, the ADA’Do’Lis”Do’Ti of the future,
has torn up all the clues
and we’re stuck, simply stuck,
with what we mortals think
until we sink to the bottom of the SEA!

Helen / 29 August 2006


© Copyright 2006 Helen - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2006-08-29 09:24 AM



LOL...ok.  We can blame him...


Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2006-08-29 09:30 AM


Brava. Love it!
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3 posted 2006-08-29 10:03 AM


these are SO much fun to read! Very creative... (thanks for including me!!)
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4 posted 2006-08-29 10:07 AM


Helen~
Tee-Hee-Hee ....

'Marge, Marge Tindal,
oh, she’s a sly one holding hands
with Seymour Tabin'


BIG SMILES .... I like being sly with Sy~

Adorably done ... oh, Loper ?
You inspire to the max !!

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -       noles1@totcon.com       

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5 posted 2006-08-29 10:15 AM


Helen...You did get inspired, didn't you...nope...not going to try it, no way!!!  
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6 posted 2006-08-29 11:23 AM


I raise my cup to you as Queen of the Blue Pages romp

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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7 posted 2006-08-29 11:46 AM


Oh, oh!

"but Marge, Marge Tindal,
oh, she’s a sly one holding hands
with Seymour Tabin"

~ Well if that is Interloper's fault, then both he and Marge best batten down their hatches for there be no fury like that of Sy's scorned Isabel on the war path! lol

Enjoyed the read, you clever little Honey!

Linda


Honeybunch
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8 posted 2006-08-29 11:46 AM


  Thanks everyone.

You giving up, Interloper?  Story from titles now due from you, you know.

Honeybunch
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9 posted 2006-08-29 12:17 PM


Oops!  Can't have any triangles around!     Thanks, Linda, for reading my bit of nonsense.  
LeeJ
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10 posted 2006-08-29 12:37 PM


brilliant, just brilliant!!!!!

Enjoy you Helen!!!!

Honeybunch
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11 posted 2006-08-29 01:57 PM


Thanks, LeeJ.  Now that the fooling around is done it's back to reading pleasure - a few of yours are waiting for my brain to get into gear.  
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12 posted 2006-08-29 05:32 PM


such fun to read. lots of smiles here. martyjo
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13 posted 2006-08-29 09:52 PM


LOL, WHAT A HOOT
A FUN READ

The Lady
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14 posted 2006-08-29 10:49 PM



amazing Helen
can't do it...
but I love the way you do


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15 posted 2006-08-30 05:43 AM


:-/ my fault lol

awesome read, thanks.

     

nakdthoughts
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16 posted 2006-08-30 06:43 AM


That Interloper sure can inspire and challenge...enjoyed Helen. I only have time to read for awhile or I would join in.

Thanks
M

Honeybunch
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17 posted 2006-08-30 08:50 AM


Thanks to all!  Must be working up for the "silly season"!  

ballajosue - yes - your name came out of the hat to be the one responsible but you do know of course that you should blame Interloper.  

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