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Tomboy Desires
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Tomboy Desires |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Tomboy Desires Girly dresses are not what I desire Hair in place, loving with fire Has a place that even I can't deny But, there's more I see with longing eyes Oh, how I long for an arrow and a bow Or a slingshot to take where I may go Maybe a knife to carve whistles and little toys Think of the smiles on clamoring girls and boys! I long to run in the woods so far away Instead girly dress up games I must play I can smell the ocean hit a far away shore I have heard many stories and sailor's lore Waves pounding and smashing against wooden boats Plummeting them until they will no longer float Landing on beaches on distant sands I want to see other far-away lands! I want to hunt with well-tested skill Bringing home wild boar that I did kill. I want to live with a passionate fire After I have filled my tomboy desires. aziza |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Good write. Write on! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms az..I can neuter a gnat with a crossbow bolt at 50 paces.... well ..I can swat one with a flyswatter if I get close enough and if it is flying slow.. cool stuff ms |
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Dublin Boy Member
since 2006-08-26
Posts 102UK |
I like the build-up of images in this poem, aziza. Very effective. Cheers, Bill |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Loved this write, and I know this tom boy feeling too. Nicely done! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
love that tomboy feeling nicely done aziza... |
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