Open Poetry #38 |
Into The Whatever |
seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Once again The road before me lies divided One path festooned In diffused light An effusion of brilliance Cascading like diamonds Through lace trimmed branches While the other path Is laden heavily With the mist shrouded shadows Of uncertainty And questionable outcome So down which path Do I begin by placing my foot? The obvious Is the inconspicuous For while the sunlight offers hope It also offers thoughts of the mundane There is no challenge Hidden on the clarion path It is the surreptitious trail That calls to me For somewhere among The opaque foliage Lies the test of my spirit And with eyes cast forward Heart braced Footstep light I begin my journey Into the whatever. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sandra~ 'somewhere among The opaque foliage Lies the test of my spirit' Your spirit soars~ This is just 'one' of the reasons I so enjoy reading you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"With the mist shrouded shadows Of uncertainty" I knew you wouldn't take the other path... well done |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Beautiful write! ~*~ which path should you choose you must choose between the two pick straight and narrow Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Dublin Boy Member
since 2006-08-26
Posts 102UK |
Never take the easy option, eh? A strong and beautifully-worded write, which I thoroughly enjoyed. Cheers, Bill |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
If the body is young and fiesty the more adventurous road may be your path, but if the body is weary all torn filled with pain. The sunlit road is the road to take for peace is at the end. Hugs BonBon |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
The journey is one that we all must walk sometimes. You step oh so lightly sweetie, down your path, and your heart does shine. seek the flame within yourself |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
A path I've walked...and I always seem to choose dappbled light. Such a thought filled poem!! |
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