Open Poetry #38 |
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Awakening |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan ![]() |
Appease my mind let thoughts rest deep in placid waters of quiescent sleep burgeoning dark like dawns fog creep over fair skin bared in nights ocean deep feather tip fingers float and seek shoulder of strength to lay soft cheek breaths rise and fall draws body to pique awakening eyes so recently meek blushing as dawn through drawn shades peek mind now awake thoughts lively and deep. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
lovely Sandra... did I mention I like your work? |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nicely composed...an enjoyable moment in the waters... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
seraphin As lovely as a flowers face. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sandra~ There is always a piece of soft beauty in your thoughts~ 'feather tip fingers float and seek shoulder of strength to lay soft cheek' This is just one that I greatly enjoyed~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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