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Open Poetry #38

Surrender To The Dark

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2006-08-22 12:00 PM

He lays her down
on crown of clovers
smooth the ground
wet with the shimmers of dew

kissed by two

desires union
under twilight stars

the distance now seems so far

as fingers lightly trace the scar
the past disappears
as his soul spins
in her embrace

lingers in touch
softly caressing her face

surrender quietly
when sandman comes

rest still in the darkness
while dreaming, as one.

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (08-22-2006 12:39 PM).]

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2006-08-22 12:15 PM

I surrender dear
let slumber encompass us
sleeping in content

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2006-08-22 02:04 PM

a very pretty poem....

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2006-08-22 05:48 PM

Wow, so delicately sensual...simply an
awesome feel.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2006-08-22 07:06 PM

sensual and exquisite
to be read again
and again...

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