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Klassy Lassy
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0 posted 2006-08-22 11:50 AM



Fickle flames a two-edged sword,
  cleaves flesh and mind asunder,

a moment's gleam, O mortal dream,
  mere flashes midst the thunder.

Then descends the Still Small Voice,
  quiets earthly time and number,

Unfolds the path of Spirit's own,
  Love's walk of Soul and wonder.

~~~~~~~~~~~
Musings on Magnus' poem
Yea, though I walk...


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LeeJ
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1 posted 2006-08-22 12:37 PM


wonderful, both articulation and read...loved this!!!!
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2 posted 2006-08-22 12:38 PM



You were right, poet...
a response to his poem
definitely deserved a
peace rose...



You wrote a marvelous response...


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3 posted 2006-08-22 01:02 PM


This is absolutely stunning and beautiful writing!
Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2006-08-22 01:21 PM


ms kl, purdy as poetic proverbs can be, enjoyed it
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5 posted 2006-08-22 04:31 PM


Nicely done my friend,  I am impressed and
humbled as well....I'll try to give you
more in the not too distand future as the
thunder rolls and tendrils of light pierce
the skies.

The Lady
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6 posted 2006-08-22 10:57 PM



Simply magic, Klassy!

Klassy Lassy
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7 posted 2006-08-23 01:01 AM


Lee, I'm delighted to share my poem with you.  hugs!
~~~~~

Sunshine, thank you for posting the rose.  It's beautiful, and I see Magnus was touched, too!  
~~~~~

Gentle Spirit, thank you!
~~~~~

D. S.  Pretty proverbs?  Awwww....
~~~~~

Barry, I am sincerely moved by your poem and it still echoes in my thoughts.
~~~~~

Lady, Shazam!  LOL  Thank you!
`  

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8 posted 2006-08-23 01:08 PM


A wonderful, well written response

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Klassy Lassy
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9 posted 2006-08-23 01:16 PM


May your day unfold on wings!  
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10 posted 2006-08-23 01:23 PM


KL.......Lovely comes from lovely...ain't it grand!!  
Klassy Lassy
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11 posted 2006-08-23 01:47 PM


And you, my sweet friend, are .... grand!  Thank you.

love, me

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