Open Poetry #38 |
After the storm... |
Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Fickle flames a two-edged sword, cleaves flesh and mind asunder, a moment's gleam, O mortal dream, mere flashes midst the thunder. Then descends the Still Small Voice, quiets earthly time and number, Unfolds the path of Spirit's own, Love's walk of Soul and wonder. ~~~~~~~~~~~ Musings on Magnus' poem Yea, though I walk... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
wonderful, both articulation and read...loved this!!!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You were right, poet... a response to his poem definitely deserved a peace rose... You wrote a marvelous response... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is absolutely stunning and beautiful writing! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms kl, purdy as poetic proverbs can be, enjoyed it |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nicely done my friend, I am impressed and humbled as well....I'll try to give you more in the not too distand future as the thunder rolls and tendrils of light pierce the skies. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Simply magic, Klassy! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Lee, I'm delighted to share my poem with you. hugs! ~~~~~ Sunshine, thank you for posting the rose. It's beautiful, and I see Magnus was touched, too! ~~~~~ Gentle Spirit, thank you! ~~~~~ D. S. Pretty proverbs? Awwww.... ~~~~~ Barry, I am sincerely moved by your poem and it still echoes in my thoughts. ~~~~~ Lady, Shazam! LOL Thank you! ` |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
A wonderful, well written response Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
May your day unfold on wings! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
KL.......Lovely comes from lovely...ain't it grand!! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
And you, my sweet friend, are .... grand! Thank you. love, me |
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