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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-08-22 08:33 AM


Rewrite:

A Randy Sly

My Randy dragon sits in sigh
Sits the thinker thinking sly
But in those thoughts is Puck and woo
To make you cross a line or two

He woos you with warmth of heart
Swearing that’s his only art
But if you take his hand in May
You’ll find he means another way

For Randy is a state of high
That hatches plots to make you sigh
Whose background is a dark abyss?
Hovering over cacti bliss

In other words he gets his kicks
By miss-be-guided little tricks
And if you fall his rouse of way
I’m sure that you will rue the day

But Randy’s now a kind old soul
And with his age has changed his goal


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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2006-08-22 08:35 AM


Sir Sey, you ARE the master of rhyme divine.  Good morning.
Sunshine
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2 posted 2006-08-22 08:44 AM



Thank you for bringing the smiles in...

Congrats on the 30,000, Sy!


LeeJ
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3 posted 2006-08-22 08:48 AM


hey Sy, good morning
another write
another lesson in life

well done & Congratulations


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4 posted 2006-08-22 08:41 PM


Excellent story Sir Sy....Are you sure he
has changed?  IF he is kin to you, well.....
I sorta doubt it!!

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2006-08-22 09:56 PM


Gentle Spirit
You are a gentle spirit.

Sunshine
Thanks for the remind.

LeeJ
Thank you sweety,

Magnus
Said the spider to the fly. LOL

The Lady
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6 posted 2006-08-22 10:48 PM




Delightful, Sir Sy!
Made me chuckle.

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2006-08-23 08:27 AM


Lady,
Thank you, thank you.

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8 posted 2006-08-23 12:58 PM


Give Randy a stroke for me
I love it!


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Martie
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9 posted 2006-08-23 01:25 PM


Sy...Tell Randy he's my kind of dragon!
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2006-08-23 01:44 PM


Interloper
I'll do that. LOL

Martie
Thank you I'll tell him.


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