| Open Poetry #38 |
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Canon In "We" Major |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan
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Canon In “We” Major I met I knew I fell I loved. You met You knew You fell You loved. Is there more? Surely there is. For the stars have written A passage for us. Spelled out in the night Brilliant star light There for our taking Directions for making Each day A pathway To the future If we so wish. I knew I fell I loved I followed. You knew You fell You loved You followed. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I like your song of love Sandra... and the title is wonderful |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sandra~ There are treasured footprints to follow in this one~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sandra, your sighs are showing, they are lovely. |
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Interloper![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done ![]() Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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