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seraphin
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0 posted 2006-08-21 10:30 PM


Canon In “We” Major

I met
I knew
I fell
I loved.

You met
You knew
You fell
You loved.

Is there more?
Surely there is.
For the stars have written
A passage for us.
Spelled out in the night
Brilliant star light
There for our taking
Directions for making
Each day
A pathway
To the future
If we so wish.

I knew
I fell
I loved
I followed.

You knew
You fell
You loved
You followed.


© Copyright 2006 Sandra McDonald - All Rights Reserved
The Lady
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The Southwest
1 posted 2006-08-22 12:12 PM



I like your
song of love
Sandra...
and the title is
wonderful


Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2006-08-28 01:44 PM


Sandra~
There are treasured footprints to follow in this one~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2006-08-28 02:23 PM


ms sandra, your sighs are showing, they are lovely.
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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2006-08-28 04:40 PM


Well done

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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