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kip bender's drum
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kip bender's drum |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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there on the under side of a kip bow's river the benders knead the waters with mallet finger drumming unraveling the lady's proper tea from it's cocoon of refuge gifting her exposure to dreams where she is sinfully indelicate they are the vines at her ankles the sticky shoe mud she swims they are snug breath gasping that press her cries to pillows and pat their hands on fever'd brow to soothduce her lingering she speaks the conjure tongue then her mind drinks from the liquor man of sudden she gates the benders brim ______________ daark scribblenote: under the river of dreams, the dark ones that unravel you and make you run, but make you miss them when you awake.. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Softly smiling at this one Daark, and must admit I love the scribblenote on this one as much as the poem itself. Nicely penned, oh Dark one.. seek the flame within yourself |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, thanks lady friend, watch out for those dark dreams..they can be dangerous I hear |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
she speaks the conjure tongue then her mind drinks from the liquor man ~*~ Yes, dark dreams...and more than bedsheets tangle ankles in the shadows of sleep this hinges nicely with the dreamscape of hours ago...and perhaps a river ran through that one, as well. Always, an enjoyable read, poet. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
dark dreams dark reality both dangerous fever'd... you're in fine tongue today Stranger |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
No vines at the ankles to drown me, my dark friend, but I do breathe the whispers, dream of lace and sunshine on occasion. And your poems always whisper... ~ K |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thanks for the light in my cavern eye _____________________ lady one, thanks for entering here and wearing some shadow ______________________ ms kl, you are neon in my shade thank you for the glowspeak |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
dark can unraval you and make one run- your whispers always give me a smile  My spirit will rise |
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