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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2006-08-20 07:19 PM



I know not
of what is yet to come
and I know not
of what is to become of my heart
But in God
I put my trust
And in God
I put my faith
Surely
the Angels
will see me through
my troubled times
and wipe the tears
that stain my eyes
My heart has been broken
into a million pieces
but by moonlight
it will be put
back together
with love and
with the utmost attention
I admit
I am a bit frightened
at the leap
I have taken
I allowed myself
to freefall
from the highest point
into another's arm
lastnight
I fell deep within
the eyes of affection
yet did not lose
my sense of direction
I know not
of what is yet to come
But I do know
God will pick me up
if I were to fall....


If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

© Copyright 2006 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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Posts 13989

1 posted 2006-08-20 08:18 PM


But I do know
God will pick me up
if I were to fall....


Lovely writing Kristen.

tecoyah
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since 2003-11-16
Posts 83
NY
2 posted 2006-08-20 09:14 PM


" fell deep within
the eyes of affection
yet did not lose
my sense of direction"

.....Nice, well done

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2006-08-20 09:25 PM


understanding this completely
and smiling a thank you,
for reading my spill of words

RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia
4 posted 2006-08-21 04:36 AM


I love this, an amazing insperation to my day.
Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
5 posted 2006-08-21 07:45 AM


kewl stuff ms...faith is more lovely
than any religion, am proud of your position on this

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2006-08-21 12:29 PM


"I fell deep within
the eyes of affection
yet did not lose
my sense of direction"

~ Bravo! Tread carefully but be open to new opportunities.

Remember, Dear One, all angels land on their feet despite the turbulence! Be strong, keep your eyes and heart open ~ and keep the faith!

A touching baring of both your heart and soul.

Loving hug,
Linda

Magnus
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7 posted 2006-08-21 06:10 PM


Most definitely He will, without reservation
or doubt.  Nice poem, thanx.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2006-08-21 06:14 PM


Enjoyed...James
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