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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-08-21 07:30 AM


Phantoms and Fantasies

My phantoms live my fantasies
A world of welcome pleasantries
The best that all my mind can give
A magic place for me to live

Where clouds out do the northern lights
And stars light up the velvet nights
Where senses fill their every need
Come mature and drop their seed

It is a place with little gage
A place of play with little age
There are no coups to change the core
It is a place of evermore

You are complete where two are one
A garden of the earth and sun
A given place from God to you
That does not wait a future do

Take its hand don’t let it go
This is your heaven make it so



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Honeybunch
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1 posted 2006-08-21 09:34 AM


Yes, beautiful!  My phantoms also live my fantasies and heaven it surely is!  
inot2B
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2 posted 2006-08-21 02:00 PM


Beautifully written. My day is not complete without reading your words.
Interloper
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2006-08-21 03:43 PM


1derful, my friend

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Klassy Lassy
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4 posted 2006-08-21 03:52 PM


Oh, This is special, as are you, Sy, and heaven's garden is just what I need this morning .  You have seeded my thought beautifully Thank you.  ~ Karen
Earth Angel
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5 posted 2006-08-21 05:38 PM


Thank you for seeding my fantasy garden with your flowery speech and sentiments.

Loving Light 'n a little angel smooch,
EA

Magnus
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6 posted 2006-08-21 06:17 PM


Nicely done Sir T. You have the touch,
thanx!

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7 posted 2006-08-21 06:28 PM



     and a for my dear sir-

         a day without you
       is like a life time of
   never seeing what lies within the clouds
             heaven bound-

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2006-08-21 07:41 PM


Honeybunch
You are as sweet as the honey in your name.


inot2B
Thank you, thank you.

Interloper,
Delighted my friend.

Klassy,
Anything for a classy Karen.

Earth Angel,
I'll take the little smooch and I'll send you some more seeds.

Magnus
For that I thank you much.

MGROVES
I missed you.


The Lady
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9 posted 2006-08-22 01:29 AM



"Where clouds out do the northern lights
And stars light up the velvet nights"

what exquisite thoughts

delightful Sir!

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2006-08-22 07:54 AM


Lady
The delight is mine dear Lady.

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