Open Poetry #38 |
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Phantoms and Fantasies |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla ![]() |
Phantoms and Fantasies My phantoms live my fantasies A world of welcome pleasantries The best that all my mind can give A magic place for me to live Where clouds out do the northern lights And stars light up the velvet nights Where senses fill their every need Come mature and drop their seed It is a place with little gage A place of play with little age There are no coups to change the core It is a place of evermore You are complete where two are one A garden of the earth and sun A given place from God to you That does not wait a future do Take its hand don’t let it go This is your heaven make it so |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, beautiful! My phantoms also live my fantasies and heaven it surely is! ![]() |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Beautifully written. My day is not complete without reading your words. |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful, my friend ![]() Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Oh, This is special, as are you, Sy, and heaven's garden is just what I need this morning . You have seeded my thought beautifully Thank you. ~ Karen ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Thank you for seeding my fantasy garden with your flowery speech and sentiments. ![]() Loving Light 'n a little angel smooch, EA |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nicely done Sir T. You have the touch, thanx! |
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MGROVES![]() ![]()
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
![]() ![]() a day without you is like a life time of never seeing what lies within the clouds heaven bound- My spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Honeybunch You are as sweet as the honey in your name. ![]() inot2B Thank you, thank you. Interloper, Delighted my friend. Klassy, Anything for a classy Karen. Earth Angel, I'll take the little smooch and I'll send you some more seeds. ![]() Magnus For that I thank you much. MGROVES I missed you. ![]() |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Where clouds out do the northern lights And stars light up the velvet nights" what exquisite thoughts delightful Sir! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady The delight is mine dear Lady. ![]() |
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