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Open Poetry #38

Flowers

tecoyah
Member

since 2003-11-16

Posts 83
NY

0 posted 2006-08-20 09:11 PM

You put flowers in your hair
Soft pedals made brittle by your cheeks
Bleeding fragrance to the air
Dull sweetness lost in your scent
You put flowers in your hair
Wilted beauty in red by those lips
As if attempting to compare
No taste of sugar from its leaf
You put flowers in your hair
But they only pale in my minds light
And it just seems so unfair
Fading colors with your smile

You put flowers in your hair
But I cant see them…anymore

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2006-08-20 09:37 PM

an enjoyable read, thanks for sharing this fragrant flower
but I think you meant it to be 'petals'
as opposed to pedals

AllyKat
Member

since 2005-01-30

Posts 73
jeffersonville,in

2 posted 2006-08-20 09:41 PM

This is b-e-a-utiful!! I love it. This was something good to read. Keep up the good work!
Alli~~

I remember us together
I remember the times we shared
I remember when we loved eachother
I remember when you once cared.

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