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Open Poetry #38

Holey Water of the Urban Shaman

Effigy
Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 486
disbelief

0 posted 2006-08-19 12:09 PM

In the back left-hand corner
of the parking lot...somewhere
between tires edge, under
shadow of red steel and black rubber
an oily puddle collects lost
rainbows (an asphalt oasis).

The sole reflecting pond in a
parking lot jungle reflects concrete
intentions with a slightly greasy nature.

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

1 posted 2006-08-19 12:20 PM

Wow. Terrific write, and talented use of metaphor. I read and re-read with the same reaction...Wow!

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

2 posted 2006-08-19 02:01 PM

Wow is the word! Loved your metaphors, too.
Brilliantly written!

miscellanea

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