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chavie at the dog hill low |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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old chevy mosey'n down doin the gin gravel travel soot man has his shiny on his razoo did the smooth now he wear his rubbin skin for the preebu' jeen she got her cotton water'd by the rain tree willow make it sticky to her lovely make the bad men beg for her dance feet behind their sippin board tables creole is oozin the slivers windows got the seep sweats and she writes words in steam naughty word grinny's part of her stir up candy before she rubs on ol jeans and gives the soot man her smitten _______________ daark scribblenote: boozoo at a lake charles neighborhood dive spankin zy' |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
steamy warm, this...  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS....hmmmm.....and the scribble note was to help me understand?  This rattled my mental cage.  |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh my goodness, I could hear the cajun in that one. I love the way they talk down there-- and the smooth sensual feel was strong, too. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
All of the above, and my usual ahhhhhhhh! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, must be the midwest? thanks lady friend ________________ ms martie...just the beach at santa barbara surfers right? (grin) thanks lil neighbor ________________ ms nan, thanks for the visit ms, yes a bit of boozoo groove _________________ ms sandra, as usual, you smile me with your sashay speak |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
It matters not, what language you speak dark one.... I love listening.....  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, thank you for listening slowly |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I am at a loss. It's hard to respond without sounding like I am gushing. I melted in the heat. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms az...snowcandy is lovely when it is melting just a bit...thanks lady |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Je veux savoir ! Comment vous faites ceci ! ! ! ! Comment vous écrivez avec ce beaucoup de feu *stamping my foot petulently*  Sandra |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sandra, le diable m'a incité à le faire |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
ha! le diable en effet... soot man est le diable! nice poem though... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady one, thanks for the eyes from your tall house window |
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