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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
drive away please only drive away this one time turn and drive away away don’t look back don’t see me like this |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ohh.... so poignant... nicely done, sir. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
But to allow someone to see, to know the truth, is such a wonderful gift even if that person is not fully aware of what they have been given. They will be one day. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetJaime~ I can only offer this electronic *hug*, knowing it is not enough~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh, that's gorgeous. So few words, so much emotion conveyed. You're a master of pain. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
The above comments agreed with fully. I can think of nothing more to add. Sandra |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jamie The tear is not built of shame, but of feeling...like this poem. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
don’t see me like this As if all partings aren't hard enough... the pain of this plea tears right through a heart for there is no hope... all the good is gone. Superb wring from a tender heart! *S* |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
Wow...found this one somehow. Best 22 words I have ever read. Man, wow. |
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