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Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

0 posted 2006-08-17 03:20 PM

A Quiet Dusk

I remember
early morning storms,
thunder rumbles and growls,
young love cataclysms;

smoldering afternoons:
airless panting heat,
middle-aged resignation.

Let us,
you and I,
meet in the cool of evening,
in the peace
of honeysuckle porches.

Let us savor
a quiet dusk.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

1 posted 2006-08-17 03:30 PM

and let me keep this to savor this time again, Nan! It is breath taking in honesty and simplicity, and your creative word choice is marvelous!

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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2006-08-17 03:36 PM

You Texans shore can write

I love it!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

David D Jerald
Member

since 2006-08-07

Posts 74
Tucson, Arizona

3 posted 2006-08-17 03:47 PM

Dear Pilgrimage,
I really like your poem, very simple and very beautiful
David D Jerald

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2006-08-17 04:10 PM

"Let us,
you and I,
meet in the cool of evening,
in the peace
of honeysuckle porches.

Let us savor
a quiet dusk."

love it...

M

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

5 posted 2006-08-17 04:20 PM

Yes.....sigh.....that is the way. I'm so glad you posted this.

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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2006-08-17 06:58 PM

such peaceful beauty
a quiet dusk

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2006-08-17 07:06 PM

Lovely poem...

Dusk
It comes so suddenly
right after mauve
someone dumps charcoal into it
and stirs until just a small sun slips
cool
into night

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2006-08-17 07:24 PM

Nan~
*sigh* ... this is just beautifully word-painted~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

9 posted 2006-08-18 09:46 AM

Thanks, guys. I really appreciate it. Martie, what a great description of the end of the day. Thank you for that.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

10 posted 2006-08-20 08:59 AM

I love the evening dusk..

Greatly enjoyed.

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