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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2006-08-17 01:31 PM



~*~
yearning to enter
the hard cold ice of your heart
impenetrable
~*~

Inspired by:  /pip/Forum95/HTML/002625.html


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (08-17-2006 05:33 PM).]

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2006-08-17 02:37 PM


whoa....heavy metal
Pilgrimage
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2 posted 2006-08-17 05:07 PM


only take me in,
my warm hands will soften stone,
my lips will melt ice.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2006-08-17 05:21 PM


"yearning to enter
the hard cold ice of your heart
impenetrable"

spare me the cold
let open the core of heart
to reclaim the warmth

Lighthousebob
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4 posted 2006-08-17 05:23 PM


Such emotion with so few words.

Enjoyed much.

-Bob

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2006-08-17 05:38 PM


LeeJ ~
Not from this cowboy

Pilgrimage ~
come into my arms
we shall melt polar ice cap
soft lovely kisses

Maureen ~
warming to the core
reclaiming love lost within
true love spares us not

Lighthousebob ~
Thanx, Bob.  'preciate it

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2006-08-17 05:43 PM


yearning to enter
the hard cold ice of your heart
impenetrable


spare me the cold
let open the core of heart
to reclaim the warmth

warming to the core
reclaiming love lost within
true love spares us not


spare us not the love
that hastens to close the door
that welcomes within


Interloper
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Deep in the heart
7 posted 2006-08-18 10:19 AM


Maureen ~
love is the doorstop
keeping open giving hearts
always inviting

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

aziza
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8 posted 2006-08-20 03:24 AM


I think this is incredibly beautiful
then I clicked the link and I was incredibly honored.

I really like your poem a lot.

aziza

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
9 posted 2006-08-21 12:51 PM



A cool read
for a hot day...

Well done, 'Loper.


JamesMichael
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10 posted 2006-08-21 05:53 PM


Some are cold and some are warm...James
The Lady
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11 posted 2006-08-22 01:21 AM



sigh...
and this one is cold
and warm


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