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poettothecars
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0 posted 2006-08-17 09:45 AM


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A Wish of Surety

17 August 2006


Just to want her love
but unable to give such joy
For where was reality
that division divided by two

Empty and unfulfilled
sold out and tried to begin
Of that day, a wire connected
but unable to be joined to relate

A love entangled
one of a sight to ponder
To feel the pain in surrender
a mark placed before the road

This milestone to reach
if only possible was true
For she does know
that unknown phrase of
“I sure wish I could love you”


© 2006 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)

a poet who cares


© Copyright 2006 Christopher W Herbert - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-08-18 12:32 PM


sadly, that is not an uncommon ending point
poettothecars
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2 posted 2006-08-18 06:54 PM


The end point is but the beginning, while separation brings about such questions in relation to the quest

Thank you for your kind words

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