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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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0 posted 2006-08-17 08:26 AM


Your voice is sigh song
in sensual concerto
music to my ears
this rhapsody of spirit
whispers softly, to my soul.
                                                                                                        
{Five hundred twenty five thousand
six hundred minutes
five hundred twenty five thousand
moments to dear
five hundred twenty five thousand
six hundred minutes
how do you measure - measure a year?

In daylights-in sunsets
in midnights-in cups of coffee
in inches- in miles
in laughter- in strife

In five hundred twenty five thousand
six hundred minutes
how do you measure
the year in a life  }
{from Rent}

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (08-17-2006 10:45 AM).]

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2006-08-17 08:40 AM



Ergo, your gentle...

smiling at this, little one...


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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2006-08-17 10:35 AM


some measure in inches and miles
I prefer in laughter and smiles

Well done, indeed!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Martie
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3 posted 2006-08-17 07:36 PM


Donna...so much power in just a voice...I think you must listen well.  
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