Open Poetry #38 |
Chain Me |
aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Chain Me Tear me apart with your words rip me slice me entice me with your mind as your story wraps and binds Slam me with your sadness slap me slander me in mocking song as you build your case to prove the sanity you wished you had chain me restrain me in odious bile as you dice and dissect with biting words of hate. aziza |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
can see you chained and helpless but also unharmed and walking away after with new wings interesting process this ms |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Shut my mouth! vicious, vengeful, vitriolic venting Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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David D Jerald Member
since 2006-08-07
Posts 74Tucson, Arizona |
Dear Aziza, Very good and oh so true. I was in kick boxing for many a years. I won some lost some, but never in my life did I ever win a verbal battle with a woman. Your poem reminded me of that. Thanks David D Jerald |
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