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aziza
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0 posted 2006-08-17 03:42 AM


Chain Me

Tear me apart with your words
rip me
slice me
entice me with your mind
as your story wraps and binds
Slam me with your sadness
slap me
slander me
in mocking song
as you build your case to
prove the sanity you wished you had
chain me
restrain me
in odious bile
as you dice and dissect
with biting words of hate.

aziza

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Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
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1 posted 2006-08-17 07:27 AM


can see you chained and helpless
but also unharmed
and walking away after
with new wings
interesting process this ms

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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2006-08-17 10:25 AM


Shut my mouth!
vicious, vengeful, vitriolic venting

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

David D Jerald
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since 2006-08-07
Posts 74
Tucson, Arizona
3 posted 2006-08-17 04:10 PM


Dear Aziza, Very good and oh so true. I was in kick boxing for many a years. I won some lost some, but never in my life did I ever win a verbal battle with a woman. Your poem reminded me of that.
Thanks
David D Jerald

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