Open Poetry #38 |
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The Indian Rabbit Story |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Rabbit you trickster you try to out wit the fox Fox told you about your tail once as long as his. Fox told rabbit he was going to trade the fishes with indians for some turquoise Rabbit inquired how to catch fishes Fox told rabbit to put tail in water Fox showed rabbit 3 fishes he caught Fox left, rabbit put his tail in icy water Rabbit figures he can catch 5 fish by morning rabbit wants to get all the turquoise Sun rises and fox finds rabbit tail frozen in water fox gives rabbit a big push,tail breaks off Now we know why rabbit has no tail, I wrote this for Marge Tindal after reading all the indian stories online as well as her work. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kimmie~ You are SO ADORABLE ... this is such a wonderful *gift*~ I thank the good Lord for returning you safely here~ May you continue in the greatest of health, my friend~ I love this ... and thank you so genuinely for your friendship and thoughtfulness~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I knew Marge would love it!!! ~ and so did I! That was quite a tail! ~ I mean "tale"! lol Loving hug and a big warm smile, Linda |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
what a wonderful story! thanks for sharing |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Marge; this was so much fun to read and write all these tales from the indians I just told them my way. I will be writing more. Earth Angel; This was the first tale I read and it was about the rabbits lost tail. It was so funny I had to share it with my friends here at pip The Lady; I too am also pleased that you enjoyed it. The Cherokee and other indians express themselves using nature and living creatures to tell stories about their culture. Great Spirit=God |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is so cute! And it has that authentic feel to it, too. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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David D Jerald Member
since 2006-08-07
Posts 74Tucson, Arizona |
LOL LOL Very good jody 5, I can see us all around the campfire as Native Americans Indians telling that story to the little kids. They believed to. I like it. David D Jerald |
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