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themute
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since 2006-05-08
Posts 469
Maryland

0 posted 2006-08-16 02:08 AM



How dare I say I love you?
What a tragedy on you
Now you’ll have to see me different
And I can see you as I do
Without a sense of fear and sadness
I can look with tender eyes
Regardless if you love me
I will love you anyway
For I care not to gain a thing
Not your kiss your touch your thoughts
I will love you anyway
For I love you I love you I love you
I truly, truly do
I love you like I love myself
And the spider climbing slow
I love you more than some can know
In a place that gets so dark
Don’t take this wrong just take this right
I love you so that I love you completely
And I expect nothing in return  

I am the two-toed wanderer

© Copyright 2006 Matthew Patrick Holbert - All Rights Reserved
latearrival
Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
1 posted 2006-08-16 04:23 AM


Up late I see.  I Enjoy your writing and  appreciate your deep sensitivity. martyjo

[This message has been edited by latearrival (08-17-2006 02:25 AM).]

seraphin
Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004
Michigan
2 posted 2006-08-16 09:51 PM


As usual, well done!

Sandra

James_A_Fraser
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since 2003-09-03
Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines
3 posted 2006-08-17 12:30 PM


Beautifully said, beautifully felt. I know this all too well, and I wish I'd written the poem.



~~J

jody5
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since 2005-12-21
Posts 876
California, U.S.A.
4 posted 2006-08-17 01:37 AM


A beautiful well thought out poem. I admire you for being so open with your feelings.

Hugs Kimberly


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