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Open Poetry #38

my TRUE love

themute
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

0 posted 2006-08-16 02:08 AM

How dare I say I love you?
What a tragedy on you
Now you’ll have to see me different
And I can see you as I do
Without a sense of fear and sadness
I can look with tender eyes
Regardless if you love me
I will love you anyway
For I care not to gain a thing
Not your kiss your touch your thoughts
I will love you anyway
For I love you I love you I love you
I truly, truly do
I love you like I love myself
And the spider climbing slow
I love you more than some can know
In a place that gets so dark
Don’t take this wrong just take this right
I love you so that I love you completely
And I expect nothing in return

I am the two-toed wanderer

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

1 posted 2006-08-16 04:23 AM

Up late I see. I Enjoy your writing and appreciate your deep sensitivity. martyjo

[This message has been edited by latearrival (08-17-2006 02:25 AM).]

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

2 posted 2006-08-16 09:51 PM

As usual, well done!

Sandra

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

3 posted 2006-08-17 12:30 PM

Beautifully said, beautifully felt. I know this all too well, and I wish I'd written the poem.

~~J

jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

4 posted 2006-08-17 01:37 AM

A beautiful well thought out poem. I admire you for being so open with your feelings.

Hugs Kimberly

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