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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2006-08-15 01:34 PM



Dark thoughts
in the light of day
lead me to seek shelter
in the comfort of
your storm

where lightning

lights the sky;

where fires burn

the soothing flames
flicker

steady in the darkness
comforting the demons of day

where all is calmed
in the capture
by this Knight of nights.



seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (08-15-2006 06:52 PM).]

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Munda
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1 posted 2006-08-15 01:42 PM


Oh my! I wouldn't mind a Knight like that! Beautiful poem and greatly enjoyed.
Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2006-08-15 02:42 PM


ms gs, you do have a way
of making a night enjoy
the darkness, enjoyed it ms

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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2006-08-15 03:12 PM


Well writ!
I loved it

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

luminosity
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4 posted 2006-08-15 03:15 PM


smiling this stormy night looks good on you
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2006-08-15 10:23 PM



Oh, yeah....




The Lady
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The Southwest
6 posted 2006-08-15 10:53 PM




sizzling in the rain...

iliana
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7 posted 2006-08-16 02:28 AM


Donna, this is hot!  *hugs*...jo
latearrival
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8 posted 2006-08-16 03:17 AM


Gentle spirit. Loved your work. I especially noticed the glow on your face in your photo. Goes with this poem beautifully.  great piece, martyjo
LeeJ
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9 posted 2006-08-16 09:36 AM


to be, and then to be, the ultimate, in the arms of this Knight
and I can say that after looking at your new picture and Martyjo's comment.

Outstanding

Martie
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10 posted 2006-08-16 09:54 AM


Donna

"to seek shelter
in the comfort of
your storm"

I love that!!!  

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
11 posted 2006-08-16 11:44 AM


Oooo! Me like!

~May all your days and nights have a knight like that!

Beautifully written, Contessa Poetessa!

Loving Light,
Linda

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2006-08-16 07:27 PM


Nice...James
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