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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Cold glass hard, clear ice I look in yearning to enter. aziza |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
whoa...well done! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
excellent, Alison |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
I usually don't expect much from tiny poems but I mean WOW you punched me in the face with that one! Wonderful. You can put so much into such a small space. More than I can do. Cheers - Ed P.S. And I've been meaning to tell you; lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy too, lol. [Insert quote of wisdom here] |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Cold glass hard, clear ice I look in yearning to enter. I look out and there you stand I wave and you smile hello Enjoyed aziza, thanks. Sincerely Rick |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
aziza...may not be your meaning, but I thought how good that would feel on a hot day.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Gosh! Yes, yes, yes! I do so know what you mean!  EA |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There is clarity in despair at times. This seems to be one of those times. Well done, Alison. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms aliaz...does it plead with your skin to be touched too and to leave you with shivers? enjoyed this refreshment |
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