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Open Poetry #38

Cold of the Heat

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2006-08-15 12:28 PM

The fallen dove calls
The world stalls
Children are murdered
Women are exploited

The dove cries
There are no more skies
The sun has melted the caps
Years of destruction and mishaps

The dove flies in the cold of the heat
there are no more tears

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-08-15 08:32 AM

lovely....depicting both sides of life....

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2006-08-15 10:41 AM

JD~
How eloquently put~

It is so good to see you~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

artexeres
Member

since 2006-08-01

Posts 156
south africa

3 posted 2006-08-15 10:45 AM

No more tears? yet unspoken fears? a thought provoker to me, thank you for the poem.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2006-08-15 12:22 PM

Thought provoking

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2006-08-15 12:39 PM

Just Before Dawn

Crow is all darkness

among familiar life sounds

sky dove hums daylight

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