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A Shadows Pace
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A Shadows Pace |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Shadows Pace Walk with me a shadows pace Stretch the arms of trees in place Pantomime the leaves in chance See the gray in moving dance Let it press on fantasy Let it touch conspiracy Set it on a path of vie Let it be minds mystify Into a world of spirits lace Play a knight of ancient grace Let your favor catch the breeze Feel the titillate a tease It cost you nothing more than let It’s all within your mental set It is a butterfly of seem You let exist a daylight dream Watch the shadows cross the stage And you will slow the worst of age |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
ok, ok, I'm watching..anything to slow the aging process.... loved the first 4 lines.... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
"Into a world of spirits lace Play a knight of ancient grace Let your favor catch the breeze Feel the titillate a tease" The whole this is gr8 but I especially like this part, Sy  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
"It cost you nothing more than let" ::smiles:: I enjoy your butterflies Sir Sy Chuang :: bows :: |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You certainly stir the muse with all of these thoughts. Good afternoon Sir Sy. |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Seymour Tabin, You have written another exceptional poem which encourages writers like me to keep on writing. Thank you for your lovely poetry. Hugs Kimberly |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ OK keep watchen. Morning sweet. Interloper That's a good part to like, thank you. Uriah, A smile, is a smile, is a smile. Barry You got something else better to do? LOL jody5 Sweet comment, thank you. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
hoping to keep pace ~sigh~ enjoyable reading you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Midnitesun You are a dear, thank you. |
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