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yesterday to a year |
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elisalie16 Member
since 2006-07-12
Posts 118new jersey |
how about you edge that chair a little closer? we're looking out the same window through a night so thick with fog we all see only black. its outlined in gold on every other tuesday of the month but our eyes arent calenders theyre just broken shards of glass that sparkle just the same, but reflect at angels too hard to measure during structured slots. today today to yesterday we'll talk about last month last season last drink of the night to remind us of the air we lost back then on grass that wet us to shivvering bones and a heat that left through those windows we always left open. we're gonna spend the rest of our dreams thinking about a series of hours that might have formed our entire lives. [This message has been edited by elisalie16 (08-14-2006 12:19 AM).] |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
This poem is incredible. It's even more amazing when I read it out loud. So good. Thank you. xoxoxo aziza |
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elisalie16 Member
since 2006-07-12
Posts 118new jersey |
no no aziza thank YOU, i'm glad i write things you enjoy |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Anne~ There is tender beauty in these thoughts~ *sigh* ... I so greatly enjoyed the read~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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elisalie16 Member
since 2006-07-12
Posts 118new jersey |
marge i'm very happy you enjoyed it. it means a lot to me when i can write something and have it mean something to others, being as what i write about is often what means the most to me. thank you for the kudos, and i'm honored and pleased that you like my writing |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
an interesting and enjoyable read a poet who cares |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I thoroughly enjoyed this read. Write on! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely to read...and a touch of memory there for me, too Thanks  M |
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elisalie16 Member
since 2006-07-12
Posts 118new jersey |
i'm so glad you all enjoyed it |
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