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Melancholia |
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ziggystardust3 New Member
since 2006-08-13
Posts 1 |
Serotonin dreamscapes She languishes through endless Friday evenings The space between the wan light of dusk and the 3 am sky Elongating, stretching into nostalgia Rain recalls the smell of his sheets Drags its thin fingers across the small of her back Was it always like this? The red tinged periphery of vision The seduction of paper-thin steel It’s 4:15 again The film of gin and soggy cigarettes Portend that yellow, jeering dawn will soon stir from her fitful slumber |
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Sole Junior Member
since 2006-07-29
Posts 13England |
amazing word effect, speechless :P by far a fav peice so far (ive only red a couple) |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
An incredible first post. Welcome, and I look forward to reading more. |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
I echo the previous comments outstanding! Welcome to PiP, and I'll look forward to seeing more of your work! ~*Sheli*~ By words the mind is winged |
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