Open Poetry #38 |
Cold Hearts |
Masked Intruder
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since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
There comes a point when it falls. A little drip dripping off an icicle's tip, I felt it like the chill down my back every time your eyes slid across me. An ugly, sort of sordid response, one I knew was sanctioned by the heavily wood-trimmed benches, row upon row. You in the front. ... She saw the Angel of Death come and go, but not before the Demons took their toll; her Demon escaped from nightmares. You, in a nutshell. Our family, now, in Hell. The Angel of Mercy must have been on break. Flashing lights weren't enough. Those blaring sirens weren't enough. The tightened handcuffs, almost to too tightened, weren't, either. Nor were the blue-suited, kind men. They weren't heroes that night, only tired. But it was her who slept. Satisfaction didn't drip from her eyes. They simply stared as our cries were drowned out by the night. ... We watched from that wood-encrusted tomb, as the gavel sent the final trembling, and dropped that cold, cold icicle to settle into your blackened heart. -*-*- Immortality is my illusion. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I can't be for sure what this is about, but the way you wrote it was really good. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
very chilling felt the ghost of a soul sliding through the final veil as silent sirens wail |
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