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Open Poetry #38

beside love is lust

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2006-08-12 05:32 PM

sum
of horizons
splashed into corrupted attraction
of rushed micro-feelings

deep inside
the chronic wait
piles acceptance
mutual

my mask
removed from eye-lids
is a concrete amplitude
of smiles

roaming
of colorful tongue
persistent
lips crushed in tender cadence
of bellow
sound
of a moan

and silence...

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-08-14 11:01 AM

where have you been, I've missed reading you...this goes back up to the top, so others can reap the wealth of read

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2006-08-14 11:16 AM

a genuinely satisfying read
especially:

"lips crushed in tender cadence
of bellow
sound
of a moan

and silence... "

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

3 posted 2006-08-15 05:57 AM

thank you. running up and down the sea. haven't been doing any writing in a while

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2006-08-15 09:16 AM

"...Let There Be Pandonov," and there was Pandonov.

Then he looked out upon the Pandonov,
and saw that it was good.

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suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2006-08-30 01:07 PM

When I finally get a chance to read... I'm so glad you've left poetic gifts. *S*

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

6 posted 2006-08-30 01:11 PM

Just saying "I liked this so much" seems inadequate. Maybe if I add, it's just my kind of thing. No, still inadequate. Maybe I'll just read it a few times, more.

Sandra

Lisey
Junior Member

since 2006-08-27

Posts 36
UK (Wales)

7 posted 2006-08-30 01:16 PM

Truly,Truly brilliant!

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