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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2006-08-12 02:08 PM

Silence lay heavily upon the tremble
and caught the quavering sigh of
many nights shared with fireflies
and floating moons...

Time to dream of other days when
the shiver of one’s skin melded
with the giggle of one’s soul.

When the cotton ball floated
aimlessly on silk covered winds
and lodged against a faded
oak fence...awaiting a smile
that felt immense...and a tear
floated earthward on a carpet
of clouds.

Bring to my yearn the bearer
of a silhouette that one’s
grasp begs for...and then,
only then shall the waters
still upon the pond.

For a willow wept for thee.

divine chaos
Senior Member

since 2006-07-09

Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon

1 posted 2006-08-12 02:35 PM

Time to dream of other days when
the shiver of one’s skin melded
with the giggle of one’s soul.
***************

I love these lines

beautiful work, Magnus
*sigh*

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2006-08-12 03:10 PM

Magnus~
The delicacy of this thought -

'When the cotton ball floated
aimlessly on silk covered winds
and lodged against a faded
oak fence...awaiting a smile
that felt immense...and a tear
floated earthward on a carpet
of clouds.'

- whimpers with just a whisper of a *sigh*~

You are word-beautiful to me~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2006-08-12 04:08 PM

Barry, this is precious, beautiful~

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2006-08-12 04:28 PM

Barry so very...You know I love how your heart looks on your sleave.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2006-08-12 05:19 PM

amazing piece

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

6 posted 2006-08-13 11:41 AM

Oh my! What can I say?

Oh my will have to suffice.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2006-08-13 12:30 PM

Your words are whispered kisses.

Love & Light,
EA

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2006-08-13 12:45 PM

Barry,
You are as smooth as silk. Sir Barry

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2006-08-13 04:17 PM

Time to dream of other days when
the shiver of one’s skin melded
with the giggle of one’s soul.

The loss of such brings a weep... every time we realize such times belong now only to dreams.

Superb write! *S*

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

10 posted 2006-08-13 07:35 PM

Time to dream of other days when
the shiver of one’s skin melded
with the giggle of one’s soul

So beautiful - I like your Willow Tree and I love your poem

aziza

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

11 posted 2006-08-14 01:11 AM

This was just beautiful!

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

12 posted 2006-08-14 01:26 AM

Beautiful, Barry.
I enjoy your poems, martyjo

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