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Open Poetry #38

Sweetie

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2006-08-11 07:23 PM

Sweetie

He knows that
he wants her.
She knows that
he wants her.
He won't beg.
He'll tell her
just enough times
of these feelings
that seems to be growing
in the places where they grow
and if she has none to share,
he'll find the way to move on,
for having learned some
hard lessons from before,
he wasn't standing still,
he was just taking a little time
to see if his heart still could feel.

JamesLee
29July
2006

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

1 posted 2006-08-11 07:50 PM

JL,

Sometimes that is the wisest course of action. Nice write.

Kristabell

"Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life."

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

2 posted 2006-08-11 11:33 PM

wow oh wow oh wow!
Let me add, wow!
oh, wow

I think I like this.
Sandra

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2006-08-12 01:08 AM

Sadly so many people don't take the time to see if they can feel - perhaps it interferes with the mission of the moment but it's always good to stop and it's good that you know it.

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

4 posted 2006-08-12 01:12 AM

A lesson to learn here.

Nice write.

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

5 posted 2006-08-12 02:12 AM

You know, I think you feel deeply - and it shows in all you write.

I loved this.

aziza

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