sonnet 17 for caitlen my love lost

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sonnet 17 for caitlen my love lost

themute
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since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

0 posted 2006-05-26 11:55 PM

I told the girl of my love so sweet
Her face so beautiful I did not see
While I told her how I loved so deep
I knew it well the future for I weep
She wouldst distained my love oh so real
I am the fool who pushed too soon for thee
And though that girl I love may seem so meek
She has such overwhelming rule ‘ver me
No love, no love, does make my life so bleak
And harm my broken soul for which I seek
And in such wavering I do lie so weak
To recall her I’ll suffer loving breeze
          Because this love I’ll search for new loves long
          All the while becoming more wise and strong

[This message has been edited by themute (05-27-2006 12:34 AM).]

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

1 posted 2006-05-27 02:15 PM

A passion I share is the sounding beat
of a heartfelt sonnet scorched by Love's heat
though your words tremble in step by your ways ...
the forgiveness, in essence, is your praise

the words are touching, ... perhaps sharpening the count
will carry them further.

Good to read you!

cT

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2006-05-27 07:44 PM

you've done it again, m'friend
another beautifully written yearning heartwrite

themute
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

3 posted 2006-06-05 07:56 PM

40 days and 40 nights

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